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Age : 46
Registration date : 2010-08-09

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Character Name: tranix
Race: human/ adept
Sex: m

PostSubject: tranix-human hand to hand- adept.    Mon Aug 09, 2010 5:08 pm

I am looking for constructive feedback on this character. it is my first under the new rules and after a long absence from rpg.

tanix's Main Sheet
Race:
Human
Special:
Adept
Resources:
20000
Offset:
0
Remaining:
400
Essence: 6/6
Initiative Passes: 3/4
Stats
Body
Agility
Reaction
Strength
Charisma
Intuition
Logic
Willpower
Edge
Magic
Natural
B4/6
A4/6
R4/6
S3/6
C3/6
I3/6
L4/6
W3/6
E3/7
M6/6
Modified
B4/9
A4/9
R6/9
S3/9
C3/9
I3/9
L4/9
W3/9
E3/7
M6/6

Build Points
Stats 200
Race 0
Edge 10
Magic 65
Skills 110
Know/Lang Skills 1
Positive Qualities 10
Negative Qualities -10
Resources 4
Contacts 10
Total 400



Skills Rating
*Athletics 3/4
Unarmed Combat 6/6 +2 cs
*Stealth 4/4
First Aid 4/6

Knowledge skills Rating
Security Procedures 5/6
Security Design 5/6

Language skills Rating
English N
Salish 4/6
Cantonese 3/6
Hebrew 2/6
Japanese 2/6

Contacts Loyalty Connection
JayDee 5/6 5/6

Qualities BP Cost
Mentor Spirit 5
Amnesia partial -10

Adept Power Level Point Bod Agi Rea Str InP Imp Bal
Distance Strike - 2 0 0 0 0 0 0 0
Critical Strike 2 0.50 0 0 0 0 0 0 0
Improved Reflexes II - 3 0 0 2 0 2 0 0
Killing Hands - 0.5 0 0 0 0 0 0 0
Total 6 0 0 2 0 2 0 0

Novatech Navi - - 1500 1
Subvocal Microphone - 6 50 1
Middle Lifestyle (One Month) - - 5000 1
Fairlight Caliban - - 8000 1
DocWagon Contract Basic (1 year) - - 5000 1
Skinlink - 6 50 1
Total 19600

initiative 7
passes 3
Stealth (Usually Int)4+3
Disguise
Infiltration
Palming
Shadowing
Athletics (Usually Str)3+3
Climbing
Gymnastics
Running
Swimming
Unarmed Combat 6+4
first aid 3+4
distance strike
critical strike +2 unarmed
killing hands
Hi my name is Tanix, Im not sure wether that is short for something or if it is my true name. It is what the lowlife that was trying to remove my head called me when the voice woke me up. I was not to keen on letting him actually finish the job, and from what happened afterwards I was the better fighter. I have discovered since that I have gifts or abilities that are either from training or magic or both. I can speak several languages,I have detailed knowledge of security systems and security procedures, I am naturaly gifted in unarmed combat. I have only used them to defend my self, but I dont feel a moral aversion to killing. It is strange but to actually think about it I dont seem to have a moral compass to follow, I do what is needed to stay alive. I also have a voice that I hear that seems to guide me. That is how I found JayDee, she was hanging out infront of a bar as I walked past, she looked me over and then asked if I needed some work and the voice said do it. It had been awhile since I had actually cleaned up and probably looked a little ragged. I told her that if it could get me out of this place I would be glad for some work. Well she had sized me up pretty well and that was my first foray into the shadows.since that first job work has been pretty scarce, but it usually finds me when I need it.It may be hard to imagine but I dont seem to feel any particular loss without my memories... it has not stopped me from remembering everything from that first waking memory.I have decided to try and find out about myself by following what I do know. Why can I speak several languages? how did I get so proficient at martial arts? where did the security background come from? who is the voice?


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Age : 25
Registration date : 2010-07-31

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Character Name: яөъөсөр
Race: Human After All
Sex: French

PostSubject: Re: tranix-human hand to hand- adept.    Mon Aug 09, 2010 6:10 pm

You should take the Amnesia negative quality.

Quote :
Amnesia
Bonus: 10 or 25 BP
A character with Amnesia has lost some or all of her memory. (Such memory loss can be caused by neurological damage, magic, drugs or brainwashing). The severity of the character’s Amnesia is determined by the selected BP bonus offered by the quality.

For 10 BP, the amnesiac cannot recall who she is or anything about her past, but retains the use of her skills and abilities.

For 25 BP, the amnesiac has no memory of her past at all, including the skills and abilities she had learned.

Gamemasters should create character sheets for such characters, so that the player does not know her character’s abilities, attributes, and so on until the character acts on them. Amnesia may be incompatible or inappropriate in combination with other qualities (such as Trust Fund) at the gamemaster’s discretion.

I believe the 10 point bonus is appropriate in your situation.
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